You broke down the shell of my egg
You entered like a metaphor for free
You spread your wings
When I pulled you in
and flew away from me
You said, Slow down wild child!
When I was floating face first in the sea
You spread your wings
when I pullled you in
and flew away from me
You taught me not to take it to heart
and feel uncomplicatedly
But you spread your wings
When I pull you in
And fly away from me
You smile for me all the time
But I can't say that I like you cos'
You'll spread your wings
Refuse to sing
And I'll lose everything that was
You smile for me all the time
But I won't say that I like you So
You won't spread your wings
And break them in
When they refuse to go.
©2006-2009 ~KillMeHarder
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I write this kind of poetry too much. I am a hopeless romantic. I fall in love with everyone, everything anything. I fall in love easily without any hint or clue from another party. And so this poem is completely nameless because it applies to everyone.
luckily, I wrote this for a freind who wishes to play and sing songs. thus, I remove my Authors responsibility to relate to this in anyway.
luckily, I wrote this for a freind who wishes to play and sing songs. thus, I remove my Authors responsibility to relate to this in anyway.
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Oh, let her fade.
it was weird to write this. i don't norammly do the whole repeating thing. but yeah, I really hope its recieved well by the masses
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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Oh, let her fade.
You spread your wings
when I pullled you in
and flew away from me
My favourite lines
Makes me thing of dead birds and wet animals and things.
So pretty.
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Expect the worst, accept the worst, demand the worst.
I like things that have innards and sex in them
but you know... haha we have to be soft every once and a while I guess.
I'm starting to become worried that everything of mine sounds the same.
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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"A place to momentarily house all the abstractions."
You entered like a metaphor for free
You spread your wings
When I pulled you in
and flew away from me
wow this struck a chord .. caught my eye .. it makes me think of so many things ... so many images actually ...
Nice going on this one ...
I always enjoy your poetry, as much as i enjoy fresh air and rain
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"we should be thinking with our hearts, and loving with our brains" -- Yours Truly
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