You be scissors and I’ll be rock
You cut deep and I just drop
Feel so weak as I smash into your crotch
I’m a liar; I’m a liar I swear
You are layered and I am bare
You won’t stay naked and I don’t care
I don’t care
I don’t care
Please make me I’ll jump so high
Don’t say sad things about your life
When we’re tantric I stay horrified
I could fuck you, make you cream
Hold you down until you screamed
I can call on the worst of me
but...
You still cut, you still wound
And I don’t want to abuse you
Shadows haunt our separate bedrooms
So fine..
You be 'whore' and I’ll be a ghost
And your memories will stalk back
to rape us both.
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That's just beautiful. The opening lines are exquisite as well.
I think if you put another verse in before the last to even it out, it could run better.
<3
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yes i do.
note me your (home) number.
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vestrit says do as vestrit says
You be scissors and I’ll be rock
You cut deep and I just drop
Feel so weak as I smash into your crotch
however I think the best part is this little gemstone at the beginning, it really sets up the emotion for the whole piece.
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is it better do you reckon?
thanks for all megan : D
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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thank you thank you thank you.
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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thank you thank you thank you kirsterino.
I edited it slightly. added new verse for meganiki's suggestion
does it work better?
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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yes, I think the rhythm fits better now
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Expect the worst, accept the worst, demand the worst.
I love that song too.
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