scratching and biting
I am an elephant
grey and tiring
With your red core
you are on fire
my black seeds
aren't meant to inspire
They ooze poison
they poison me
I am wretched and spiteful
Unelephantly
I am a show pony
with tears in my throat
You are a stripper
with a pole of salt
And there are...
Monsters
in my house tonightLike speed freaks we leave them
behind to die
One last time
can I suck on you?
I've found that Melancholic Tigers
can easily bruise
With my red lines
and your pink tits
for your health
I would slit my wrists
But you're the best
don't forget
we don't fuck now because
This is our sex
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with tears in my throat
You are a stripper
with a pole of salt
i really like that stanza oh unelephanty one
making up words is fun.
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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Expect the worst, accept the worst, demand the worst.
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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scratching and biting
I am an elephant
grey and tiring
I really like this part, I think it is a really interesting way to open the poem. I think this has a certain pizazze that is rare. It has a rhythem that is kind of short and sharp but slides off the tongue so easily.
Really dig this.
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- annihilated with one twist of my trick scissors -
What I really like is how it seems to move through different forms as it goes - sometimes its structured then other times its just loose and fierce.
I really like it Neave.
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You've been hit by the artistic anarchy of a cultural 'rebel'.
I will deconstruct you over coffee!
i'm a hormonal little rabbit
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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Touch your thighs I'm the lonely one
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